The reason that I want to work in Austrailia
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest, I didn\'t want to stay at Austrailia but I wanted to stay in New Zealand or Canada during my working holidays. But I missed the day to apply for New Zealand visa and I couldn\'t be given the visa from Canada. Austrailia was like my insurance because they give the visa easily to most people with money and healthy body. I wasn\'t so upset and changed my mind. Their winter is not too cold like Korea so I could enjoy my favorite season, autumn long. There are blue sky, clean air and green grass too and it\'s very different from Korea. So I\'m pleased to spend my gap year in Austrailia.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Su [이름]!
Thank you for telling and giving me your answer about this topic.
Well, Australia is also a nice country to work at and spend your time while you\'re in your gap year. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> To be honest, I didn\'t want to stay in Australia since I wanted to stay in New Zealand or Canada during my working holidays. But I missed the day for the New Zealand visa application and I couldn\'t get the visa from Canada. Australia was like an assurance because they give the visa easily to most people with money and healthy body. I wasn\'t so upset and changed my mind. Their winter is not too cold just like in Korea so I could enjoy my favorite season which is autumn for a long time. There is a blue sky, clean air and green grass too and it\'s very different from Korea. So I\'m pleased to spend my gap year in Australia.
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