The reason that we should always recycle.

2020-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

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Especially, in case of plastic products, If we do not recycle those, those would go to the sea and that results pollution. Because of the pollution, ocean creatures are suffering. I think recycling is the most easy way to protect pristine. Because that can reduce costs of plastic industry but anyone can do, and anywhere can be done. Obviously, it\'s bothering than release garbage without sorting. But it\'s a very cheap effort when we think about effects of how earth would be protected.

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Hi [이름]. Great job :)
-T.Gabby :)
Especially, in case of plastic products, If we do not recycle those, those would go to the sea and that results pollution.
>> Especially, in the case of plastic products, If we don\'t recycle, it will go to the sea and that result would be pollution.
Because of the pollution, ocean creatures are suffering. I think recycling is the most easy way to protect pristine. 
>> Because of the pollution, ocean creatures are suffering. I think recycling is the easiest way to protect it\'s pristine. 
Because that can reduce costs of plastic industry but anyone can do, and anywhere can be done. 
>> Correct.
Obviously, it\'s bothering than release garbage without sorting. 
>> Obviously, it\'s bothering to release garbage without sorting. 
But it\'s a very cheap effort when we think about effects of how earth would be protected.
>> But it\'s a very cheap effort when we think about the effects on how the earth can be protected.

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