The reason to study English well.

2021-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to improve my English skills and talk to many colleagues from oversea branches. In the past few years, I didn\'t have many opportunities to work in English or useing English. Since there is a cause of COVID-19 and the CEO of PERI Korea has been a foreigner for a while, I felt the need for English more. And the work is gradually increasing in collaboration with overseas branches, and our design materials and brochures in German or English. I don\'t think it\'s impossible or difficult to work at work just because I can\'t speak English. But I think I have less chances to go higher. So every day is so busy, but I will try.

강사 첨삭

Hi Evan:)

Learning English as a foreign language will allow you to communicate with native speakers and ESL (English as a Second language). You will be able to gain a new perspective of the world, enhance your ability to communicate and understand yourself and others better.

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I want to improve my English skills and talk to many colleagues from oversea branches.
>> I want to improve my English skills and talk to many colleagues from overseas branches.

In the past few years, I didn\'t have many opportunities to work in English or useing English.
>> In the past few years, I didn\'t have many opportunities to work using the English language. 

Since there is a cause of COVID-19 and the CEO of PERI Korea has been a foreigner for a while, I felt the need for English more.
>> Since the pandemic, our CEO in PERI Korea has been changed to a foreigner temporarily. It made me felt that I needed fluent in English much more. 

And the work is gradually increasing in collaboration with overseas branches, and our design materials and brochures in German or English.
>> And the work is gradually increasing in collaboration with overseas branches. Our design materials and brochures are in German or English.

I don\'t think it\'s impossible or difficult to work at work just because I can\'t speak English.
>> I don\'t think it\'s impossible or difficult to do my job just because I can\'t speak in English well. 

But I think I have less chances to go higher.
>> CORRECT

So every day is so busy, but I will try.
>> CORRECT

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