The reason why

2021-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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The reason why I take the vaccine is that almost all teachers in my school decided to take the vaccine. Also, if I don\'t take the vaccine and get infected by virus, I cannot avoid blames.

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Good day Ms. [이름]a! Thank you for sharing a piece of your thought. Stay well.
~Aki :)
The reason why I take the vaccine is that almost all teachers in my school decided to take the vaccine. 
>>> The reason why I also wanted to take the vaccine is that almost all the teachers in my school decided to take that.
Also, if I don\'t take the vaccine and get infected by virus, I cannot avoid blames.
>>> Also, if I don\'t take the vaccine and get infected by the virus, I cannot avoid being blamed.

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