The reason why..
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The reason why I write here is to be comforted. The time that I have taken classes was so short, but I have always been comforted. Nica always said just for a tiny thing, "keep it up!" I appreciate for it.
And I heard my recorede class. I hardly heard my voice. I was so sleepy, not entirely woke up yet. For this reason, my voice was so down as small as I couldn't hear my voice. Actually, I was living in 3 flatmates who were living in each room. So I couldn't say anyhing loudly. It was my excuses.
I should say more loudly. When I feedback my class, it's hard to understand what I said. Now I'm confused because of food coma. Help me out~ Anyway see you tomorrow.
1. The book (that I want to borrow it) is not in the library.
2. (What) was once regarded as impossible has come ture.
3. Is this factory (that) you visited last year?
4. I found (it) strange (that) ~
5. The problem lies (in the fact that) ~
강사 첨삭
Thank you so much for dropping by to make your homework. I know that learning English is really challenging. I admire you for your continued dedication in becoming better. Talk to you later in class!^^
T. Nica
The reason why I write here is to be comforted.
>>The reason why I\'m writing here is to be comforted.
The time that I have taken classes was so short, but I have always been comforted.
>>The time that I have been taking classes was so short but I have always been comforted.
>>My class time is short but I\'m still comforted.
Nica always said just for a tiny thing, \"keep it up!\"
>>Nica always tells me to \"keep it up!\"even for simple things.
I appreciate for it.>>I appreciate it.And I heard my recorede class.
>>And I heard my recording.
I hardly heard my voice.
>>Correct!
I was so sleepy, not entirely woke up yet.
>>I was so sleepy and hasn\'t entirely woken up yet.
For this reason, my voice was so down as small as I couldn\'t hear my voice.
>>For this reason, my voice was so soft so I couldn\'t hear my voice
Actually, I was living in 3 flatmates who were living in each room.
>>Actually I am living with 3 flatmates and we have different rooms for each.
So I couldn\'t say anyhing loudly.
>>Correct!
It was my excuses.>>That\'s my excuse.I should say more loudly.
>>I should talk more loudly.
When I feedback my class, it\'s hard to understand what I said.
>>When I speak in class, it\'s hard to understand what I said.
Now I\'m confused because of food coma.
>>Correct!
Help me out~ Anyway see you tomorrow.>>Correct!1. The book (that I want to borrow it) is not in the library.
>>Correct!2. (What) was once regarded as impossible has come ture.
>>Correct!3. Is this factory (that) you visited last year?
>>Correct!4. I found (it) strange (that) ~
>>Correct!5. The problem lies (in the fact that) ~
>>Correct!
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