The reason why

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The reason why beer is so popular is in the feeling of drinking beer.

>> The reason why beer is so popular is in the satisfaction or feeling when drinking beer. 
I don\'t know exactly, because I don\'t drink beer much. 

>> I don\'t know exactly because I don\'t drink a lot of beer.
>> OR: I don\'t know the exact reason, because I don\'t really drink a lot of beer.
But many people are seemed like to drink because of the taste.

>> But it seems that many people drink beer because of the taste.
Like a soda, the tast of fizzy is what most people want to drink.

>> Like a soda, the fizzy taste is what most people want.
Many childran want to drink soda and many adults want to drink beer as a soda.

>> Many children want to drink soda and many adults want to have beer.
People said that the hobb which is in the beer makes beer more smoother and this make taste of beer different.

>> People said the hop which is an ingredient in making beer makes it smoother and this makes the taste different. ( It think what you really want to say is hop ^^ not hobb. ^^) 
In case of the food most people want to eat with beer is definetely chiken.

>> In terms of food, most people want to eat chicken with beer.

>> OR: In terms of food, most people want to drink beer with chicken.
Chicken food industry is very prosper in Korea.

>> Chicken food industry is very prosperous in Korea.
It was very special food in the past, but now, we eat it as a dinner or dessert.

>> correct
the second popular thing is probably fried potatoes.

>> The second popular food is probably fried potatoes.
>> OR: Probably, the second popular food to match with beer is French Fries.
Many people want to eat something which contains much oil.

>> Many people want to eat something that contains a lot of oil.

I think

>> To be continued...