The reason why car is kept from entering to center of city
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree that the car should not enter the center of city. That’s because there are numerous walking people in the central of city. There is no room for car. So when i see the car in the downtown, I accuse the owner of car. To be honest i don’t understand the intention of owner of the car. You know that there are a lot of people in downtown. The more cars there are in downtown, the more accidents happen.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]! You have a logical point why you are not in favor of allowing cars to enter the city center. Well done!
-Faith-
I agree that the car should not enter the center of city. That’s because there are numerous walking people in the central of city. >> I agree that cars should not enter the center of the city because there are numerous people walking in the central part of the city.
OR Cars should not be allowed to enter the city center because it is jampacked with people walking around.
There is no room for car. So when i see the car in the downtown, I accuse the owner of car.
>> Therefore, there is no room for cars, so when I see a car in the downtown, I judge the owner of the car.
To be honest i don’t understand the intention of owner of the car.
>> To be honest, I don’t understand the intention of the owner of the car.
You know that there are a lot of people in downtown.
>> He must know that there are a lot of people there.
OR He must be fully aware how crowded the place is.
The more cars there are in downtown, the more accidents happen.
>> The more cars are there in the downtown, the more accidents can happen.
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