The reason why i couldn’t attend today’s class!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Kate! I was suddenly kidnapped by my friend so we are heading to the theater to watch a horror movie. And, this evening I experienced weird things at school. It feels like I became an actress in horror movie! I want to share it with you. I definitely sure that this story good goes with hot summer night.
I was waiting for the elevator with my friend. When the elevator came to our floor and we stepped inside of it, the elevator suddenly made the warning horn which was like “We\'ve exceeded the quota”. But there were only two people. Me and my friend!! Moreover, there were only two people in this building because we asked to open this building to security. We felt a little bit scared but we thought that it was just an error. But after an hour, our relif turned into fear!
~To be continued~
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
It\'s okay although I hope your friend will not serve time in prison for kidnapping my dear innocent student. Haha. But Oh my god! Hahaha. The story you just told me is a hair-raising experience. Thank you for telling me though I\'m sure I\'ll have a hard time sleeping tonight thanks to that. That\'s what you get for watching a horror film. I always believed that watching a horror film can attract negative beings corporal or spiritual. I want part 2 as soon as possible. The suspense will be slowly killing me over the weekend. XD See you on Monday! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
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