the reason why I decided to go
학생이 쓴 원문
There is a guy who sits near my seat in the library.
It's been over a month since the first time I've seen him.
That I remember him might be due to his good looking.
But what makes me not lazy is the studyig hard figure of him.
I can't focus on my studying everyday.
Also, there are some days I study hard :)
But he always works hard even it makes me ashamed.
He goes to the library earlier than when I went to the library earliest.
He goes home later than when I went home latest.
Looking for him as soon as I go to the library is likey to be my habit.
Complaining about my situation seems that I make a fuss.
I guess he is preparing for examination of the public official.
If I'm right, today will be the last day I see him.
Because the test is taken tomorrow. I hope he does his best -_-)b
강사 첨삭
Hi Min!
I am chuckling here in my seat while reading this.
I guess my [이름] is falling in love! Haha!
I mean you wouldn’t be doing such things, looking for him everyday, if he doesn’t mean anything to you at all.
Hopefully, someday you can have an opportunity to meet him and converse with him formally.
-Tiny^0^
There is a guy who sits near my seat in the library.
>>correctIt's been over a month since the first time I've seen him.
>>correctThat I remember him might be due to his good looking.
>> The reason I remember him might be due to his good looking. (kk^0^)
But what makes me not lazy is the studyig hard figure of him.I can't focus on my studying everyday.
>>correctAlso, there are some days I study hard. :)
>>correctBut he always works hard even it makes me ashamed.
>> But he always works hard it even makes me ashamed.
He goes to the library earlier than when I went to the library earliest.
>> He goes to the library earlier than my earliest.
He goes home later than when I went home latest.
>> He goes home later than latest.
Looking for him as soon as I go to the library is likey to be my habit.
>>correct (Oh my, you’ve been love struck! Haha!)Complaining about my situation seems that I make a fuss.
>> Complaining about my situation seems that I’m just making a fuss.
I guess he is preparing for examination of the public official.
>> I guess he is preparing for an examination for a public official.
If I'm right, today will be the last day I see him.
>>correctBecause the test is taken tomorrow. I hope he does his best -_-)b
>>correct
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