The reason why I don't like "fast & furious"

2014-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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1) sown - snow 2) awmr - warm 3) nwidy - windy 4) sinnushe - sun shine 5) eowshr - shower 6) arin - rain 7) fgogy - foggy 8) lcdous - clouds 9) fosrt - frost 10) mepraettrue - temperature Hello teacher did you have wonderful weekend? I'm happy because I leaved office earlier. But I will do my duty tomorrow. Anyway, The reason why I don't like "fast & furious" is that it is too unrealistic. For example, Main character of "fast&furious 6" who is bald saved his x-girl friend through jumping out of the car when his car was crashing with tank!! He survived after crashing with tank! wow unbelievable !! I think It is nonsense. Of course there are many good points in this movie. but I don't like it. I want to suggest to watch a movie named " black house" which is korean movie. If you have a enough time, I recommend you to watch it.

강사 첨삭

[이름]!

Oh! I respect your opinion.

Actually, you are right. It is really unbelievable.

But I love the actors. Hihihih! They are handsome. Hahaha!

Thanks! I will search it on the internet. I will let you know immediately.

Talk to you soon. Can\'t wait to hear your ideas.
Teacher Nina

 

1) sown - snow

>> Correct!
2) awmr - warm

>> Correct!
3) nwidy - windy

>> Correct!
4) sinnushe - sun shine

>> Correct! ( sunshine ^^)
5) eowshr - shower

>> Correct!
6) arin - rain

>> Correct!
7) fgogy - foggy

>> Correct!
8) lcdous - clouds

>> Correct!
9) fosrt - frost

>> Correct!
10) mepraettrue - temperature

>> Correct!

Hello teacher

>> Correct!
did you have wonderful weekend?

>> Correct! ( Always write in capital letters the first letter of your sentence. ^^ )
I\'m happy because I leaved office earlier.

>> I\'m happy because I left the office early.
But I will do my duty tomorrow.

>> Correct!

>> OR: But I will be on duty tomorrow.
Anyway, The reason why I don\'t like \"fast & furious\" is that it is too unrealistic.

>> Correct!

For example, Main character of \"fast&furious 6\" who is bald saved his x-girl friend through jumping out of the car when his car was crashing with tank!!

>> For example, the main character of the movie \"Fast & Furious 6 who is bald saved his ex-girlfriend, by jumping out of the car when it was crashing with it a tank.
He survived after crashing with tank! wow unbelievable !!

>> He survived after the crash. Wow! Unbelievable.
I think It is nonsense.

>> Correct!

Of course there are many good points in this movie.

>> Of course, there are many good points about the movie.
but I don\'t like it.

>> Correct!
I want to suggest to watch a movie named \" black house\" which is korean movie.

>> I want to suggest a movie that you should watch, Titled \"Black House. It is a Korean movie.
If you have a enough time, I recommend you to watch it.

>> Correct!

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