The reason why I don't like "fast & furious"
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Oh! I respect your opinion.
Actually, you are right. It is really unbelievable.
But I love the actors. Hihihih! They are handsome. Hahaha!
Thanks! I will search it on the internet. I will let you know immediately.
Talk to you soon. Can\'t wait to hear your ideas.
Teacher Nina
1) sown - snow
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2) awmr - warm
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3) nwidy - windy
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4) sinnushe - sun shine
>> Correct! ( sunshine ^^)
5) eowshr - shower
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6) arin - rain
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7) fgogy - foggy
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8) lcdous - clouds
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9) fosrt - frost
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10) mepraettrue - temperature
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Hello teacher
>> Correct!
did you have wonderful weekend?
>> Correct! ( Always write in capital letters the first letter of your sentence. ^^ )
I\'m happy because I leaved office earlier.
>> I\'m happy because I left the office early.
But I will do my duty tomorrow.
>> Correct!
>> OR: But I will be on duty tomorrow.
Anyway, The reason why I don\'t like \"fast & furious\" is that it is too unrealistic.
>> Correct!
For example, Main character of \"fast&furious 6\" who is bald saved his x-girl friend through jumping out of the car when his car was crashing with tank!!
>> For example, the main character of the movie \"Fast & Furious 6 who is bald saved his ex-girlfriend, by jumping out of the car when it was crashing with it a tank.
He survived after crashing with tank! wow unbelievable !!
>> He survived after the crash. Wow! Unbelievable.
I think It is nonsense.
>> Correct!
Of course there are many good points in this movie.
>> Of course, there are many good points about the movie.
but I don\'t like it.
>> Correct!
I want to suggest to watch a movie named \" black house\" which is korean movie.
>> I want to suggest a movie that you should watch, Titled \"Black House. It is a Korean movie.
If you have a enough time, I recommend you to watch it.
>> Correct!
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