The reason why I drunk yesterday.

2020-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Teacher, I\'m sorry yesterday. Because I got drunk and I couldn\'t remember what I said. Actually, president invited our office members to his house. But, He had an important meeting, so he canceled an appointment with us. He were sorry about that, so he treated us to eat pork belly for lunch. From the time we started drinking for 1hour. Because our lunch time is 1hour. one of manager wanted to drink again after working time. So, we started drinking again after 6P.M. Yesterday, I felt not good. Because I coudn\'t sleep well and felt I got drunk easily. Although condition was not good, I drunk with coworkers. We ate fresh fish, but unfortunally, I don\'t like fish food. Then, I got drunk easily........too sad. I wanted to move another restaurant, but, no one wanted to go another restaurant. So, I gave up to to another bar and went back home. I felt lonely again..lol Teacher, I use \'so\' many times. Can you tell me another synonym \'so\'?

강사 첨삭

It\'s me again^^

Well, in your sentences we can also use \"thus\". There are other expressions like \"then\", \"therefore\", \"hence\", \"and so\" and \"consequently\".

Try to use these expressions too. :)


Teacher, I\'m sorry yesterday.
>>CORRECT!
Because I got drunk and I couldn\'t remember what I said.
>>CORRECT!
Actually, president invited our office members to his house.
>>Actually, the President invited people from my office to his house.
But, He had an important meeting, so he canceled an appointment with us.
>>But he canceled his appointment with us because he had an important meeting.
He were sorry about that, so he treated us to eat pork belly for lunch.
>>He was sorry about it so he treated us to eat pork belly for lunch.
From the time we started drinking for 1hour.
>>From that time we started drinking for one hour.
Because our lunch time is 1hour.
>>Because our lunch break is for one hour.
one of manager wanted to drink again after working time.
>>One of the managers wanted to drink again after work.
So, we started drinking again after 6P.M.
>>So we went drinking again after 6 p.m.
Yesterday, I felt not good.
>>Yesterday, I felt bad.
Because I coudn\'t sleep well and felt I got drunk easily.
>>Because I felt I couldn\'t sleep well and drank easily.
Although condition was not good, I drunk with coworkers.
>>I wasn\'t feeling well, but I drank with my coworkers.
We ate fresh fish, but unfortunally, I don\'t like fish food.
>>We had fresh fish, but unfortunately I don\'t like fish food.
Then, I got drunk easily........too sad.
>>CORRECT!
I wanted to move another restaurant, but, no one wanted to go another restaurant.
>>I wanted to move another restaurant, but nobody wanted to go to another restaurant.
So, I gave up to to another bar and went back home.
>>I gave up that we are going to move to another restaurant and went back home.
I felt lonely again..lol
>>I felt lonely again. LOL!
Teacher, I use \'so\' many times.
>>Teacher, I used \"so\" many times.
Can you tell me another synonym \'so\'?
>>Can you tell me another synonym for \"so\"?

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