The reason why I like the movie sixsense
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Hi, Faith.
I like the sixsense because this movie is very warm even though its genre is a thriller.
Also, the story is very dramatic. I couldn\'t expect the end of the story.
In the end, I understood all the awkward behaviors of the characters.
I think you may be interested in this movie so much.
Thank you for reading my homework!
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Hello, [이름] [이름]! I appreciate your effort to finish your homework. I can see that you also have impressive writing skills. Keep it up!-Faith-
Hi, Faith.>> Hi, Faith!
I like the sixsense because this movie is very warm even though its genre is a thriller.
I like the sixsense because this movie is very warm even though its genre is a thriller.
>> I like Sixth Sense because this movie is very warm even though its genre is a thriller.
Also, the story is very dramatic.
Also, the story is very dramatic.
>> CORRECT
OR In addition, it is very dramatic.
I couldn\'t expect the end of the story.
>> CORRECT
OR The conclusion of the movie was surprising.
In the end, I understood all the awkward behaviors of the characters.
In the end, I understood all the awkward behaviors of the characters.
>> CORRECT
OR In the end, I understood all the weird behaviors of the characters.
I think you may be interested in this movie so much.
>> CORRECT
Thank you for reading my homework!
Thank you for reading my homework!
>> CORRECT
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