The reason why I need break

2011-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

학생이 쓴 원문

Toeic score taken last month was announced today. It has fallen down for three months. To tell the truth, I didn't like English during my school days. I couldn't direct needs of English. It was only to enter into a college. However, I've been abroad last year and met a lot of friends from other conturies. I thought that I wasn't able to get along with them due to my poor English. But I've gotten excited and figure out the real one. Although I faced the wall whenever I said, I wasn't weary of it. I want to see a movie without subtitle and speak much more fluently. I'm sad that I have to study in order to get a job. So I seems to get lost excitement of English. If I felt free from this burden like a score, I could really love English. I need to take away my terrible score. : b

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! I am really sorry that you are somehow burdened in studying for your toeic score. I hope I can really help you to have the highest score that you could get. Let’s just study and have conversation as if we are just telling stories to each other. In that case we are not only having fun but also learning English. Aja aja! Fighting! -Tiny^0^ Toeic score taken last month was announced today. >>The results of the Toeic test taken last month was announced today.It has fallen down for three months. >>correctTo tell the truth, I didn't like English during my school days. >> To tell you the truth, I didn't like English during my school days.I couldn't direct needs of English. >>I couldn’t see the direct needs of English.It was only to enter into a college. >>It was only because of college entrance.However, I've been abroad last year and met a lot of friends from other conturies. >>correctI thought that I wasn't able to get along with them due to my poor English. >>correctBut I've gotten excited and figure out the real one. >> But I've gotten excited and figure out the reality.Although I faced the wall whenever I said, I wasn't weary of it. >>Although I face the wall whenever I say I wasn't weary of it. >>grammar rule: Since you used 'whenever' so you have to use the 'simple present' form of the verb. ^0^I want to see a movie without subtitle and speak much more fluently. >>correctI'm sad that I have to study in order to get a job. >>correctSo I seems to get lost excitement of English. >> So it seems I lost my excitement towards English.If I felt free from this burden like a score, I could really love English. >>If I am free from the burden of getting a high score, I could really love English.I need to take away my terrible score. : b >>I need to get rid of my terrible score.

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