The reason why I want to go back in time and be a little kid again
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes. I want to go back in time and be a little kid again. I think I had a great childhood. I didn’t have much concern and I can do most of things that I want. My parents always protect me so there’s nothing that was too hard. But after I grow up, I realize a lot of things and I’m anxious a lot. I miss my childhood so much.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Once in a while. we think about our childhood days. We remember the days when we were worry free, not that much responsibilities and everything was fun. If I was also given the chance, I would also like to go back just once. :)
Yes. I want to go back in time and be a little kid again.
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I think I had a great childhood.
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I didn’t have much concern and I can do most of things that I want.
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My parents always protect me so there’s nothing that was too hard.
>> My parents always protected me so nothing was too hard for me.
But after I grow up, I realize a lot of things and I’m anxious a lot.
>> But after I grow up, I realize a lot of things and I’m anxious a lot of times.
I miss my childhood so much.
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