The reason why I want to study English.

2019-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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As I\'m working in trading company, I read mailes in English. When I see them, I understand, but I can\'t understand sometimes. And I somtimes write mail in English. That time I spend a lot of time and have a headache. From this class, I want to familar with Enlish and I want to have confidence more. I forget vocabulary and how to make sentences. So please help me to learn vocabulary and express in English. Until I can speak Enlish well, I will do my best. Please see me>_

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As I\'m working in trading company, I read mailes in English.

>> As I\'m working in a trading company, I read mails in English.

When I see them, I understand, but I can\'t understand sometimes.

>> When I see them, I understand, but I sometimes can\'t.

And I somtimes write mail in English. That time I spend a lot of time and have a headache. 

>> And I somtimes write mails in English. At this times, I spend a lot of time and have a headache. 
 From this class, I want to familar with Enlish and I want to have confidence more. 

>> From this class, I want to be more familiar with English and I want to have more confidence. 
 I forget vocabulary and how to make sentences.

>> I forgot a lot of English vocabulary and how to make sentences.

So please help me to learn vocabulary and express in English. 

>> Correct
 Until I can speak English well, I will do my best. Please see me>_

>> Correct

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