The reason why I want to work in a cafe
학생이 쓴 원문
When I experienced the iced long black for the first time, it was like a revolution to the elementary schooler. It was very cold but not heavy like soda and I was waked up drinking it. So I have spent much time in cafes to study, meet people, read books and just kill time. I have heard that people in Austrailia don\'t stay so long in a cafe like people in Korea. However we don\'t just drink beverages but also spend much time to study and do their personal works. As a person who grew up in this culture, I think cafe means more than just place to drink coffee. So I wanted to enjoy it but now I want to serve high-quality coffee with my own flavors, comfortable place and atmospher on my own. Most of all, I could enjoy all of these if I work as a barista.
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~Teacher Gina
>> When I experienced drinking the iced long black coffee for the first time, it was like a revolution for an elementary student. It was very cold but not heavy like soda and I woke up upon drinking it.
Because of this experience, I spent so much time in cafes to study, meet people, read books and kill time. I heard that people in Australia don\'t stay long in a cafe like people in Korea. However, we don\'t just drink beverages but we also spend much time in a cafe to study and do personal works. As a person who grew up in this culture, I think cafe means more than just a place to drink coffee. So I wanted to enjoy it but now I want to a serve high-quality coffee which showcases my own flavors in a comfortable place and atmosphere on my own. Most of all, I could enjoy all of these if I work as a barista.
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