the reason why I wrote a work in early time
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello,
You are the best!
Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful stories with me my dear student.^^
I really appreciate it.
Hopefully, you\'ll be guided by the corrections.
Just keep on writing, my dear!^^
See you later and please drink moderately later!^^
T. Nina
1.He gave ________ the money.
him
>> CORRECT
2. She went ________ on Friday.
to him
>> CORRECT
3. I will lend ________ my book.
him
>> CORRECT
4. You should give that shirt ________ .
to her
>> CORRECT
5. You should give ________ that shirt.
her
>> CORRECT
6. I phoned ________ three times.
to him
>> Him
7. Are you talking ________?
to me
>> CORRECT
8. I spoke ________ about the trip.
to you
>> CORRECT
9. I didn\'t see ________ at the supermarket.
them
>> CORRECT
10. She did not tell ________ her name.
me
>> CORRECT
I bought 2 books on book store to study english.
>> I bought two books at the bookstore to study English.
>> OR: I bought two English books at the bookstore.
but when i arrived home, I fell a sleep at 8 pm.
>> But, when I arrived home, I felt sleepy so I slept at 8 o\'clock in the morning.
and I woke up at 4 am.
>> Then, I woke up at 4 o\'clock in the morning.
so I want to submit my homework.
>> So, I submitted my homework.^^
It is the reason why I submit my home work early time.
>> This is the reason that I submitted my homework early.
oh, I almost forgot drying my clothes which I washed yesterday.
>> Oh! I almost forgot to dry my clothes that I washed yesterday.
Today I have a plan to enjoy a party wiht my coworkers.
>> Today, I am planning to enjoy the party with my co-workers.
I think I am going to drink much alchol.
>> I think I am going to drink too much alcohol.^^
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