The reasons why I prefer to spend time with friends

2014-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hello Erine! I've been quite busy these days and I didn't have much time to do my homework. This topic was given a few days ago, but it must be okay, right? (Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?) It seems important to stay alone, have peaceful moment and think about myself. I usually take time by myself a couple of hours a day. I prefer, however, to spend time with friends than being alone. First, chattering on with some friends releases my stress. I like to talk about many subject, small talks about dating or even to serious political issues. And my friends and I share information by communication. I believe wisdom spreads. Also I like activities such as dancing, running or singing. It is more fun to do these activities with many people. What’s exciting to dance if without buddies? Most of all, I value the moment of staying with warm-hearted companions and family. We care each other and I love the feeling of being connected to others.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Chae Yoon!^^ I know you have been busy but I really appreciate your effort in not forgetting to do your homework!^^ If you missed a day without doing your homework because you were busy, just answer the homework for the present day. I don\'t want to give you burden.^^ But if you want to go back to the homework you missed, it\'s not a problem with me either!^^ See you in class!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Hello Erine! >>Correct. I\'ve been quite busy these days and I didn\'t have much time to do my homework. >>Correct. This topic was given a few days ago, but it must be okay, right?>>This topic was given a few days ago but I must do it, right?(Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?) It seems important to stay alone, have peaceful moment and think about myself. >> Correct. I usually take time by myself a couple of hours a day. >> Correct. I prefer, however, to spend time with friends than being alone. >> Correct. First, chattering on with some friends releases my stress. >> First, chattering with some friends releases my stress. (However, I need to make sure about one thing: Do you mean \"chatting\" or do you really mean \"chattering\"?) I like to talk about many subject, small talks about dating or even to serious political issues. >> I like to talk about many subjects/topics, have small talks about dating and even about serious political issues. And my friends and I share information by communication. >>My friends and I share information through communicating with each other. I believe wisdom spreads. >> Correct. Also I like activities such as dancing, running or singing. >>I also like activities such as dancing, running and singing. It is more fun to do these activities with many people. >> Correct. What’s exciting to dance if without buddies? >> Do you think it is exciting to dance without your buddies? Most of all, I value the moment of staying with warm-hearted companions and family. >> Correct. We care each other and I love the feeling of being connected to others. >> We care about each other and love the feeling of being connected to other people.  

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