The reasons why we have to protect the natural beauty spots.
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Writing Exercise: With increasing populations and ever growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty?Answer in 5 sentences or more.
Protecting the natural beauty spots is very important. There are some reasons why we must protect the natural things.
First, The natural sports can purify the polluted air so We can get the fresh air.
Second,By protecting the natural stuffs, We can possible to stop that animals and plats are going extinct.
Third, We can prevent the \"global warming\".
Finally, I think that the natural beauty spots can make the countries better tourist attractions.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sue!
Good start for the week!
Please take note of the proper use of articles.
Also be careful with the capitalization rules.
Keep writing and working hard!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Protecting the natural beauty spots is very important.
>> Correct
There are some reasons why we must protect the natural things.
>> There are some reasons why we must protect nature.
First, The natural sports can purify the polluted air so We can get the fresh air.
First, The natural sports can purify the polluted air so We can get the fresh air.
>> First, natural sports can purify polluted air so we can breathe in fresh air.
Second,By protecting the natural stuffs, We can possible to stop that animals and plats are going extinct.
Second,By protecting the natural stuffs, We can possible to stop that animals and plats are going extinct.
>> Second, by protecting the natural environment, it\'s possible to prevent animals and plants from going extinct.
Third, We can prevent the \"global warming\".
Third, We can prevent the \"global warming\".
>> Third, we can prevent \"global warming\".
Finally, I think that the natural beauty spots can make the countries better tourist attractions.
Finally, I think that the natural beauty spots can make the countries better tourist attractions.
>> Finally, I think that natural beauty spots can make countries better tourist attractions.
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