the resolution
학생이 쓴 원문
First i want to make ABS. The plan which is for making ABS is to do exercise every day, every morning. morning time is the best time to do exercise. and i will put effort into not eating junkfood. junkfood is really bad for our body.
Second i want to study math more. To solve math is hard for me. But l hope that i overcome my limitation. so l i will try and try even if i fail. my finally aim is to be a human who is good at math.
강사 첨삭
Hi Stella!
T[이름]k you for writing your homework! ^^
You surely can achieve your goals if you work hard! :)
You surely can achieve your goals if you work hard! :)
See you tomorrow~
-T.Jhozel
First i want to make ABS.
>> First and foremost, I want to have abdominal muscles.
The plan which is for making ABS is to do exercise every day, every morning.
>> The plan for developing Abdominal muscles is to exercise every day, in the morning.
morning time is the best time to do exercise. and i will put effort into not eating junkfood.
>> The best time to exercise is in the morning. and I will make an effort to avoid eating junk food.
junkfood is really bad for our body.
>> Junk food is extremely unhealthy for our bodies.
Second i want to study math more.
>> Second, I want to improve my math skills.
To solve math is hard for me.
>> Solving math is difficult for me.
But l hope that i overcome my limitation. so l i will try and try even if i fail.
>> But I\'m hoping to overcome my limitation. So I\'ll keep trying, even if I fail.
my finally aim is to be a human who is good at math.
>> My ultimate goal is to be good in math. 파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.