the rest about my family

as I told you yesterday my brother want to major in Music like a composition. but my parents think that is much difficult to earning money or living. anyway I agree my brother. because I consider he has a talent about playing a piano or guitar. now then, do you wonder about me? haha^^(humor?). befor anything else I think I'm a very special person regard as english. I heard that most people recieve a individual education. but I'm not. I've studied english with alone since I first faced the english by relatives. so I proud of my distinguished english.

Hey [이름]!

I had fun correcting your composition. haha!^^(it expresses humor, right?). Americans sometimes say

 "LOL" to express humor.  You've given me a lot of information about you. I can see that you are focused 

on learning English. Great job! I've corrected your composition. I've also added other ways for you to say your sentences.^^

Karla

as I told you yesterday my brother want to major in Music like a composition.

>>As I told you yesterday, my brother wants to major in Music like composition.

>>Other: As I said in our previous discussion, my brother wants to major in Music like composition.

but my parents think that is much difficult to earning money or living.

>>But my parents think that it is more difficult to earn money.

>>Other: However, my parents think that it is not a practical way to earn money.

anyway I agree my brother.

>>Anyway, I agree with my brother.

>>Other: Anyway, I am on my brother's side.

because I consider he has a talent about playing a piano or guitar.

>>Because I consider he has a talent in playing the piano and the guitar.

>>Because I consider his gift in playing instuments such as the piano and the guitar.

now then, do you wonder about me? haha^^(humor?).

>>CORRECT

>>Other: Now, are you curious about me?

befor anything else I think I'm a very special person regard as english.

>>Before anything else, I think I'm a very special person with regards to my English.

>>Above all, I think I am a very extraordinary person when it comes to my English ability.

I heard that most people recieve a individual education.

>>I heard that most people receive an individual education.
>>I heard that a lot of people go through individual classes.

but I'm not.

>>CORRECT

>>But, I have a different case.

I've studied english with alone since I first faced the english by relatives.

>>I've studied English alone since I first faced English speakers through my relatives.

>>I've studied English by myself ever since I encountered English speakers through my relatives.

so I proud of my distinguished english.

>>So I'm proud of my distinguished English.

>>So I'm honored to have my distinct English ability.