The restaurant nearby my house
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
What kind of food do you like?
Korean food? or chinese food? or your local food?
I would like to introduce my local restaurant to you.
All of foods is full in big size bowl. Can you imagine?
I think it is a bigger size than your thinking.
In the morning, you are going to wash your face with water. The bowl for washing face is for food in the restaurant. They cook cold noodle an hot noodle as full as the bowl. So woman can not eat all of them. A few man can not eat all either.
But I can eat all. I have a big stomach.
So call the restaurant \'sesudaeya cold noodle\' in Korea.
강사 첨삭
1.I would like to introduce my local restaurant to you.
>>I would like to introduce my favorite local restaurant to you.
2. All of foods is full in big size bowl.
>>All of the food is being served in big size bowls.
3. Can you imagine?
>>CORRECT
OR>>Imagine that?
4. I think it is a bigger size than your thinking.
>>I think it\'s bigger than what you think.
5. In the morning, you are going to wash your face with water.
>>CORRECT
OR>>After waking up, you are going to wash your face with water.
6. The bowl for washing face is for food in the restaurant.
>>The bowl for washing face is like the bowl used in that restaurant.
7. They cook cold noodle an hot noodle as full as the bowl.
>>They cook cold noodle and hot noodle as full as the bowl.
8. So woman can not eat all of them.
>>So, women can not eat all of them.
9. A few man can not eat all either.
>>A few men can not eat all of it either.
10.But I can eat all.
>>But I can eat it all.
11. I have a big stomach.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I have a large stomach.
12.So call the restaurant \'sesudaeya cold noodle\' in Korea.
>>So, we call the restaurant \'sesudaeya cold noodle\' in Korea.
Very good.
- T. Melody ^^
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