the rich and thr poor

Hello Joey!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

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T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

poor people don\'t have money, huge problem

>> Poor people don\'t have money and that\'s a huge problem.
we\'re capitalism
don\'t have money, not eating, wearing, moving

>> We practice capitalism, if you don\'t have money, you can\'t eat or have clothes.
a lot of poor people, less in given chance.

>> A lot of people have less opportunity.
so the rich and the poor ~ing

>> That\'s why there are rich and poor.