The Road

2010-09-06 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

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I read the book "The Road". I finished this today in the afternoon. I saw the movie based on the original book before I read it. The movie was quite good,but it was not much good. However,the book is really great. I like to compare original books and movies. I think books are better than movies in terms of the imagination. In the book "The Road",I could imagine the background and I started to think about the death. It was really hard to think for me because I never thought about that before. Maybe that's why I don't have a religion. Anyway,I enjoyed the book and I'm going to start to read another book.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! It's good that you enjoyed reading the book "The Road". I think that books are better than watching movies too in terms of imagination because when reading a book, you are the one creating your own image about a particular book. I hope you will enjoy the next book that you will read. Tell me about it soon! __t.karen__   Here are my corrections: I read the book "The Road". >>Correct! I finished this today in the afternoon. >>Correct! I saw the movie based on the original book before I read it. >>Correct! The movie was quite good,but it was not much good. >>The movie was quite good. However,the book is really great. >>Correct! I like to compare original books and movies. >>Correct! I think books are better than movies in terms of the imagination. >>Correct! In the book "The Road",I could imagine the background and I started to think about the death. >>In the book "The Road", I could imagine the background and I started to think about death. It was really hard to think for me because I never thought about that before. >>It was really hard for me to think about it because I never thought about that before. Maybe that's why I don't have a religion. >>Correct! Anyway,I enjoyed the book and I'm going to start to read another book. >>Correct!

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