The Road
학생이 쓴 원문
I read the book "The Road".
I finished this today in the afternoon.
I saw the movie based on the original book before I read it.
The movie was quite good,but it was not much good.
However,the book is really great.
I like to compare original books and movies.
I think books are better than movies in terms of the imagination.
In the book "The Road",I could imagine the background and I started to think about the death.
It was really hard to think for me because I never thought about that before.
Maybe that's why I don't have a religion.
Anyway,I enjoyed the book and I'm going to start to read another book.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! It's good that you enjoyed reading the book "The Road". I think that books are better than watching movies too in terms of imagination because when reading a book, you are the one creating your own image about a particular book. I hope you will enjoy the next book that you will read. Tell me about it soon! __t.karen__
Here are my corrections:
I read the book "The Road".
>>Correct!
I finished this today in the afternoon.
>>Correct!
I saw the movie based on the original book before I read it.
>>Correct!
The movie was quite good,but it was not much good.
>>The movie was quite good.
However,the book is really great.
>>Correct!
I like to compare original books and movies.
>>Correct!
I think books are better than movies in terms of the imagination.
>>Correct!
In the book "The Road",I could imagine the background and I started to think about the death.
>>In the book "The Road", I could imagine the background and I started to think about death.
It was really hard to think for me because I never thought about that before.
>>It was really hard for me to think about it because I never thought about that before.
Maybe that's why I don't have a religion.
>>Correct!
Anyway,I enjoyed the book and I'm going to start to read another book.
>>Correct!
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