The role of father
학생이 쓴 원문
Recently the role of father changed.
Some of father raise children that's a nice thing.
If my wife wants to go out and work, I'll agree her opinion.
I can raise children. ㅋ,ㅋ
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
You did a good job writing this! This is indeed a hot topic, and you have a nice opinion about it. These are some corrections:
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Recently the role of father changed.>> Recently the roles of fathers have changed.Some of father raise children that's a nice thing.>>Some fathers raise children and that is a nice thing.If my wife wants to go out and work, I'll agree her opinion.>> If my wife wants to go out and work, I'll agree with her opinion.I can raise children. ㅋ,ㅋ
>>Correct
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