The role of status
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The status has significant role of making impressions for people and beliefs to specific opinions.
>>The concept of status plays a significant role in shaping impressions and influencing beliefs toward specific opinions.
In some cases, we tend to follow people who have a high status even though they claim unclear directions.
>>Correct.
From the past to the present, the importance of status has been strengthening.
>>Over time, the importance of status has continued to strengthen from the past to the present.
However, the way to gain status differs.
>>However, the methods for acquiring status can vary.
These days, it is possible for people to get social status by their own efforts.
>>Correct.
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