The safest of transport

2021-06-14 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I consider a train to be the safest of transport, but I didn\'t have a chance taking a lot of it. I think it\'s romantoc to take a train as Trans-Siberian train. I have never been on the it,hohoho. It brings a lot of memories to the people of our time. Someday, I\'ll have a chance.

강사 첨삭

Morning Suzan! 
Yes, definitely there will be a time where you can rice on it again. 
I would love to try that too. 

I consider a train to be the safest of transport, but I didn\'t have a chance taking a lot of it.
>>> I think trains are the safest means of transportation, but I haven\'t had a chance to ride a lot.
I think it\'s romantoc to take a train as Trans-Siberian train.
>>> I think it\'s romantic to take a train by trans-Siberian train.
I have never been on the it,hohoho.
>>> I\'ve never ridden it before.
It brings a lot of memories to the people of our time.
>>> It brings many memories to the people of our time.
Someday, I\'ll have a chance.
>>> Someday, I\'ll have the chance.

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