The sand art
학생이 쓴 원문
Yesterday, I saw the sand art that you said before at YouTube. That was so amazing. I think they have magic hands. They changed their pictures in a moment. But I couldn't find out "weazing". I hope I could see them as well.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jee Eun,
Thank you for appreciating the art that I told you. It is really amazing. I think you misunderstood what I said, I didn't say "weazing". I said amazing. kkk
See you in the class.
-Verna-
Yesterday, I saw the sand art that you said before at YouTube.
>>Yesterday, I saw the sand art that you were telling me before in YouTube.
That was so amazing.
>>Correct
I think they have magic hands.
>> I think they have magical hands.
They changed their pictures in a moment.
>> They changed their paints in a moment.
But I couldn't find out "weazing".
>> Correct
I hope I could see them as well.
>> Correct
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