The scariest moment in my life.
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I think the scariest moment in my life is when i rode The Splash mountin.(At universal studios) and I rember that when i was waiting in the line I was so scared that I cried but when I rode it it wasn\'t even that scary and that is the scariest moment in my life.
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I think the scariest moment in my life is when i rode The Splash mountin.
>>> I think the scariest moment of my life was when I rode Splash Mountain.
(At universal studios) and I rember that when i was waiting in the line I was so scared that I cried but when I rode it it wasn\'t even that scary and that is the scariest moment in my life.
>>> At Universal Studios, I remember that when I was waiting in line, I was so scared that I cried, but when I rode it, it wasn\'t even that scary, and that was the scariest moment in my life.
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