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2022-05-13 · 첨삭 강사 Aki

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I think that my daughter\'s school system is different from the Minisrty Education and Province Office of Educaion in many pasrts. For example, the number od students per class and curriculum etc The school started as an alternative school before 20 years. It was not a regular school. It was founded by 1000 progressive educational activists. Although now the school become a regular school, but the system still keep an alternative school system.

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Happy Friday, Ms. [이름]!
This is really interesting because in the Philippines all schools must be under the policy of the Ministry of Education. They must follow the regulation mandated by the Head of the Ministry. Although Private and Public schools have differences but in general they are almost the same with the guidelines and regulations.
Thank you for sharing this information. Talk to you later.
Aki~

I think that my daughter\'s school system is different from the Minisrty Education and Province Office of Educaion in many pasrts.
>>> I think my daughter\'s school system is different from the Ministry of Education and Province Office of Education in many parts.

For example, the number od students per class and curriculum etc
>>> For example, the number of students per class and curriculum, etc.
>>> One part is the number of students per class and their curriculum.

The school started as an alternative school before 20 years.
>>>The school started as an alternative school 20 years ago.
>>>The school started as an alternative school before 2002.

It was not a regular school.
>>> CORRECT!

It was founded by 1000 progressive educational activists.
>>> CORRECT!

Although now the school become a regular school, but the system still keeps an alternative school system.
>>> CORRECT!

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