The school test!!!

2011-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Karen

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In school our test score came out. I was so nervous if my score was bad and my mom would nag to me. But when our classmates got the score i was surprise! Because our first score students had 5wrong things on their test! But the first students was my best friend and some other boys. I felt very shy that i want to get in a mouse hall because i got 8wrong on my test.It wasn't very good score but i was very proud of my self^^I hope i can do better next time!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! First of all congratulations for sending your first composition. I hope you can keep on sending them. Don\'t be sad about your score, you may not be the top student in your class, but for me, you are number 1!!!! (Weeeeee ^^ ). I know that you will do better next time. Don\'t let your score get you down. Keep being happy and just do your best and everything will turn out for the best! Good night! I\'ll talk to you tomorrow (*__*) In school our test score came out. >> Our school released our test scores. >> Our test scores came out.  I was so nervous if my score was bad and my mom would nag to me. >>I was so nervous because if my score was bad, my mom would nag me (-__-)  But when our classmates got the score i was surprise! >>But when our classmates got their scores I was surprised! (O_o)  Because our first score students had 5wrong things on their tst! >>Because in their first test scores, they had 5 wrong answers their test! (*__*)  But the first students was my best friend and some other boys. >>But the top students was my best friend ans some other boys. (^_^)  I felt very shy that i want to get in a mouse hall because i got 8wrong on my test. >> I felt very shy that I wanted to get in a mouse hole. It was because I got 8 wrong anwers on my test. It wasn\'t very good score but i was very proud of my self^^ >>It wasn\'t a very good score but I was very proud of myself.   <3 <3 I hope i can do better next time!! >> I hope I will do better next time! (^^)  

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