The school was horrible.

2010-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Today, the school was hrrible. The techers made us to practice some stupide thing called Nanta in Korean.It is some kind of making sound by hitting things. If there were many things that made dfrent sounds, then I'd liked it. But we only hitted books. And techers taught us really boaring. I hope I won't do thing as such as Nanta as long as I live.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for your composition. Below are my corrections. Please be guided. Have a good day!

Hahahah, it's  I can imagine you you feel about it. 

Cheer up!! It's Monday it's a brand new day to start the whole week. 

See you tonight, 

T. Connie

Today, the school was hrrible.

>> Today, the school was horrible.

The techers made us to practice some stupide thing called Nanta in Korean.

>> The teachers made us practice some stupid thing called Nanta in Korean.

It is some kind of making sound by hitting things.

>> correct

If there were many things that made dfrent sounds, then I'd liked it.

>> If there were many things that made different sounds, then I'd like it.

But we only hitted books.

>> But we only hit books.

And techers taught us really boaring.

>> And the teachers taught us something boring.

I hope I won't do thing as such as Nanta as long as I live.

>> I hope that I won't do such a thing as Nanta as long as I live.

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