The SEA Games
학생이 쓴 원문
I don't know the SEA Games, I means Guangzhou 2010 Asian Game.
I think you need to know it rather than say something wrong.
Do you understand??
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for your composition. I understand.
I think it was really an interesting event.
If you have any question, please ask me in the class.
Have nice day!
See you later
Anyway here are the corrections:
I don't know the SEA Games, I means Guangzhou 2010 Asian Game.
>> I'm not familiar with the SEA Games. I mean the Asian Games held in Guangzhou.I think you need to know it rather than say something wrong.
>> I think it's better to know more about something than saying something wrong about it.Do you understand??
>> Do you understand?!
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