The season now in my country
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It is lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.
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It is lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the
daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too
hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not
too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green
leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to
me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.
>> It is a lovely spring now in Korea. It is cool as well as hot in the
daytime, but at night it is cool and a little cold. But I feel it is too
hot in the daytime because I usually sweat a lot even though it is not
too hot. Actually this season is so beautiful because we can see green
leaves and beautiful flowers wherever we go, winter is much better to
me. Nowadays I like evening more than daytime.
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