The season of Korea -two
학생이 쓴 원문
Third, there is Fall.
In this season, the temperture gets sort of cold and the leaves start to fall down from their tree.
This season is really good for sightseeing mountains.
Last, there is Winter which is really cold.
Many people ride on ski or snow board for this season.
I really like this season because I like to build a snow man and especially, I love Christmas time.
강사 첨삭
Good job on this! I will see you tomorrow. Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM
Third, there is Fall.
>>>CorrectIn this season, the temperture gets sort of cold and the leaves start to fall down from their tree.
>>>In this season, the temperature gets sort of cold and the leaves start to fall down from their trees.This season is really good for sightseeing mountains.
>>>This season is a really good time to sightsee mountains.Last, there is Winter which is really cold.
>>>CorrectMany people ride on ski or snow board for this season.
>>>Many people ride on skis or snow boards for this season.I really like this season because I like to build a snow man and especially, I love Christmas time.
>>>I really like this season because I like to build a snow man and I especially love Christmas time.
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