The season of Korea-one.
학생이 쓴 원문
There are four seasons in Korea.
First, there is Spring in this season, many plant start to grow.
It's really great season to have a picnic because the weather is beautiful.
Second, there is streamly hot season named Summer.
In that season, most people eat a watermelon to be cool down.
They also use a fan too.
This season is my the worst season because it's really hot and I don't really want to do anything.
강사 첨삭
Nice topic! You should also write the seasons that most koreans like and do not like. Here are your corrections- Teacher JM
There are four seasons in Korea.>>>CorrectFirst, there is Spring in this season, many plant start to grow.
>>>First, there is Spring. In this season, many plants start to grow.It's really great season to have a picnic because the weather is beautiful.
>>>It's a really great season to have a picnic because the weather is beautiful.Second, there is streamly hot season named Summer.
>>>Second, there is a steamy hot season named Summer.In that season, most people eat a watermelon to be cool down.
>>>In that season, most people eat watermelon to cool down.They also use a fan too.
>>>CorrectThis season is my the worst season because it's really hot and I don't really want to do anything.
>>>Correct
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