the second class

It was also splendid class with you ,and I was surprised that you know 'Ugly Betty' and u like it ! As expected,that show is so popular all over the world,Isnt it? I saw that u've written that my pronunciation is good.THANKS! The first show I've seen was 'America's Next Top Model' which is hosted by Tyra Banks who is a top model. That show is still hosted in the USA even in Korea,so I'm watching it. I think my accent when I speak in english is not that the american way,for I've seen a show which is from england for about a month. After watching that show,I pronunciated english words or sentences in english way. It was weird and a little bit ridiculous. I wonder how many errors would be here,my writing. I'll be waiting for your correcting. [이름]

Hello [이름]! Good job in your composition! I've seen some errors but I'm sure you will take the corrections and learn from them. I was very thrilled that you like these shows because I LOVE them. I watch these shows everyday. I even had arguments with my younger brother about Tyra!^^ I actually watch "ugly betty" everyday before I go to work because the show makes me feel happy.   Anyway, these are my corrections:   It was also splendid class with you ,and I was surprised that you know 'Ugly Betty' and u like it ! >>It was also a splendid class with you, and I was surprised that you know "Ugly Betty" and you like it!As expected,that show is so popular all over the world,Isnt it? >>correctI saw that u've written that my pronunciation is good. >>I saw that you've written that my pronunciation is good. THANKS! >>correctThe first show I've seen was 'America's Next Top Model' which is hosted by Tyra Banks who is a top model. >>correctThat show is still hosted in the USA even in Korea,so I'm watching it. >>correctI think my accent when I speak in english is not that the american way,for I've seen a show which is from england for about a month. >>I think my accent when I speak in English is not that american, for I 've seen a show which is from England for about a month.After watching that show,I pronunciated english words or sentences in english way. >>After watching that show, I pronounced English words or sentences in a British way. It was weird and a little bit ridiculous. >>correctI wonder how many errors would be here,my writing.>>I wonder how many errors would be here in my composition. I'll be waiting for your correcting.>>I'll be waiting for your corrections.[이름]