The Second Essay

2014-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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-Does your country have special training facilities for handicapped people? I don't know any trainig facilitie. But i know one sititution. That's the Korea Blind Union. It makes a voice book and a braille book. I worked there without pay. I trasformed book into word on computer. Sorry i'm late. I have to study for test.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I made some corrections! Don\'t worry I understand See you later^^ Enjoy the rest of you day:) ~T.Chelsea -Does your country have special training facilities for handicapped people?I don\'t know any trainig facilitie. >> I don\'t know any training facilities.But i know one sititution. >> But I know one center for handicapped people.That\'s the Korea Blind Union. >> CORRECT^^It makes a voice book and a braille book. >> It makes a book in a recorded voice and a braille book.I worked there without pay. >> CORRECT^^I trasformed book into word on computer.>> I transcribe the book into words on the computer.Sorry i\'m late. >> correct^^I have to study for test. >> I have to study for a test.

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