The Second Essay
학생이 쓴 원문
-Does your country have special training facilities for handicapped people?
I don't know any trainig facilitie.
But i know one sititution.
That's the Korea Blind Union.
It makes a voice book and a braille book.
I worked there without pay.
I trasformed book into word on computer.
Sorry i'm late.
I have to study for test.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
I made some corrections!
Don\'t worry I understand
See you later^^
Enjoy the rest of you day:)
~T.Chelsea
-Does your country have special training facilities for handicapped people?I don\'t know any trainig facilitie.
>> I don\'t know any training facilities.But i know one sititution.
>> But I know one center for handicapped people.That\'s the Korea Blind Union.
>> CORRECT^^It makes a voice book and a braille book.
>> It makes a book in a recorded voice and a braille book.I worked there without pay.
>> CORRECT^^I trasformed book into word on computer.>> I transcribe the book into words on the computer.Sorry i\'m late.
>> correct^^I have to study for test.
>> I have to study for a test.
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