The second homework~!
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1. to strengthen
The one of mission is to strengthen leadership in science and technology by capacity-building and training of young scientific and technological talents.
>> One of the missions of the organization is to strengthen leadership in science and technology by capacity-building and training of young scientific and technological talents.
2. set up
The organization set up trusted platform for creating an innovative ecosystem of academic activities based on creativity and autonomy.
>> The organization set up a trusted platform for creating an innovative ecosystem of academic activities based on creativity and autonomy.
3. share knowledge and experiences
The organizaion porvide opportunity to share knowledge and experiences in various fields by creating Hub for Start-up and Knowledge Sharing to Lead the Fourth Industrial Revolution
>> The organizaion provides opportunity to share knowledge and experiences in various fields by creating a Hub for Start-up and Knowledge Sharing to Lead the Fourth Industrial Revolution
4. accurate
The architecture called for accurate work in drawing.
>> The architect called for an accurate work on drawing.
5. contemporary
I am studying contemporary cities to solve the problems at hand in the city.
>> correct
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