The Second one ~~~~`
학생이 쓴 원문
HI~~~~
Today's class was so amazing. it was deep conversation between you and me. Ecomonics was huge difficult all the time, but it was not boring.
I should summerize the concept of "Dumping" again on the board.
The first is that one company sell product into two places with differnt price. the second is that one company make the price lower than competitor's.
The "Dumping activity was defiend as "law". Howerver My point of view is differnt.
Market allows the companies to compete each other, which means that making barrier can not be accepted.
For instance, FTA and WTO show us thath Free trading is optimal choice.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Of course, no subject is boring if you know a lot of things about it. Right on! Thanks for explaining this things to me. I have a few questions about it tomorrow. See yah!
-T.Dominic -
HI~~~~ >>Hi, Today\'s class was so amazing.
>>CORRECT
it was deep conversation between you and me.
>> It was deep conversation between you and me.
>>We had a deep conversation.
Ecomonics was huge difficult all the time, but it was not boring.>>Ecomonics IS very difficult all the time, but it is not boring.
I should summerize the concept of \"Dumping\" again on the board.>> I should summerize the concept of \"Dumping\" again on the board.The first is that one company sell product into two places with differnt price.
>> The first is that one company would sell a product to two places with different prices.
the second is that one company make the price lower than competitor\'s.>> The second is that one company makes the price lower than it\'s competitor\'s.The \"Dumping activity was defiend as \"law\".
>> The \"Dumping\" activity is defined as \"law\".
Howerver My point of view is differnt. >> However my point of view is different.Market allows the companies to compete each other, which means that making barrier can not be accepted. >>The market allows the companies to compete with one another, which means that making a barrier can not be allowed.For instance, FTA and WTO show us thath Free trading is optimal choice.
>> For instance, FTA and WTO show us that free trading is an optimal choice.
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