The Second Piece: How well you get a good score in English for university admission?

Yo [이름],

I think everything is hard. Nothing is easy. Doing nothing at home is hard. It\'s boring and annoying. So like everything else in life, studying is hard. I know that. But I commend you because you realized that you have to study really hard to achieve your goals in life. I am looking forward to your next piece. See you!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

When I went to the academy, I had a mind to study hard.

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OR>> When I went to the academy, I was thinking/planing of studying hard.

However, I was disappointed at my endurance.

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Although I study hard at first as I had planned, before long I was in bad feeling like loneliness, disliking to do anything and so on.

>>Although I studied hard at first as I had planned, before long I was feeling bad like I feel lonely, disliking to do anything and so on.

Then, when I came back home, I was crying, telling my parents that studying was very hard for me.

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However, I had no choice, because the only thing that I could do is to study hard.

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If I only did part-time jobs, my life would be part-time job heaven.

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That meaned I couldn\'t seek my dream because I only did like a thing not related to my dream.

>>That means, I couldn\'t seek my dream because I only did things not related to my dream.

So, only studying could make me seek my dream and set my objective.

>>So, only studying could make me seek my dream and so I set my objective.

To seek the dream and make my life not regretted, I should go to the academy next day.
>> To seek my dream and to not regret later in life, I should go to the academy the next day.
Please, look forward to next piece~!!

>>Please look forward to my next piece!!