The Secret Garden

Hi, my teahcer Tiny :D You might have heard about this as a famouse musician. But it means the name of Korean drama which finshed last month. The drama was very popular in Korea. When we talked about phobias yesterday, a character acting in this drama crossed my mind. He was very rich and awesome in this drama, but the personality of him was kind of cynical. There was a tough woman who he had a cruch on. He also had claustrophobia due to a elevator accident when he was young. There was a fire fighter dead by the accident to save the guy. It turned out that the woman was a daughter of the dead fire fighter. There were many episodes and social problems from their different lives. Finally, it ended up that the guy got over claustrophobia and they lived happliy. :-b

Good day [이름]! Thank you for this composition. ^^ Please check the corrections made and study them well! Have a blast! -Tiny^0^   The Secret Garden >>Correct! Hi, my teahcer Tiny :D >>Correct! >>Spelling check:teacherYou might have heard about this as a famouse musician. >>You might have heard about this famous musician. But it means the name of Korean drama which finshed last month. >>He has a name that is the same with the title of a Korean drama which finished last month. The drama was very popular in Korea. >>Correct!When we talked about phobias yesterday, a character acting in this drama crossed my mind. >>Correct!He was very rich and awesome in this drama, but the personality of him was kind of cynical. >>Correct! >>...but his personality was kind of cynical.There was a tough woman who he had a cruch on.>>There was a tough woman whom he had a crush on.>>Spelling check: crushHe also had claustrophobia due to a elevator accident when he was young. >>He also had claustrophobia due to an elevator accident when he was young.There was a fire fighter dead by the accident to save the guy. >>There was a dead fire fighter in the accident to save the guy. It turned out that the woman was a daughter of the dead fire fighter. >>It turned out that the woman was the daughter of the dead fire fighter.There were many episodes and social problems from their different lives. >>Correct!Finally, it ended up that the guy got over claustrophobia and they lived happliy. :-b >>Finally, it ended up that the guy got over his claustrophobia and they lived happliy. :-b