The secret of bat\'s survive strategy resist to viruses. (News translation)

2020-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I translated a news. Bats that known as cause of COVID-19 survive with no symptoms although infect with thousands of kinds of viruses, be slow in aging, don\'t get cancer easly. To solve the bat\'s secret, consortium \'Bat1k\' which established in 2017 suggests analysis results of 1,421 bat\'s genomes. July 23(local time), according to Max-Planck and \'science magazine\', Bat1k researchers announced analysis results of gene sequences including Rhinolophus in Nature a current issue. Bat\'s gene sequencing is not the first time, but it became possible to compare genetic differences with other mammalian species including human, by raising the level close to the human genome. So researchers compared Rhinolophus genetic differences with 42 of other mammals from sea cow that is sea mammals to human etc. In comparison of \'APOBEC3\' gene that immunity to virus infection, It is known that over 10 genes Induce inflammation to infection are disabled state differently other mammals.

강사 첨삭

This is really informative, Stella. ^^

Thank you!
Have a happy weekend. :*


~t. Ally


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Bats that known as cause of COVID-19 survive with no symptoms although infect with thousands of kinds of viruses, be slow in aging, don\'t get cancer easly.
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Bats that are known as the cause of COVID-19 survive with no symptoms, although they infect others with thousands of kinds of viruses, they are slow in aging, and they don\'t get cancer easily.

To solve the bat\'s secret, consortium \'Bat1k\' which established in 2017 suggests analysis results of 1,421 bat\'s genomes.
>> To solve the bat\'s secret, consortium \'Bat1k\' which was established in 2017, suggests analysis results of 1,421 bats\' genomes.

July 23(local time), according to Max-Planck and \'science magazine\', Bat1k researchers announced analysis results of gene sequences including Rhinolophus in Nature, a current issue.
>> CORRECT!

Bat\'s gene sequencing is not the first time, but it became possible to compare genetic differences with other mammalian species including human, by raising the level close to the human genome.
>> Bats\' gene sequencing is not the first time, but it became possible to compare genetic differences with other mammalian species including human, by raising the level close to the human genome.

So researchers compared Rhinolophus genetic differences with 42 of other mammals from sea cow that is sea mammals to human etc.
>> So researchers compared Rhinolophus genetic differences with 42 of other mammals from sea cows, that are sea mammals, to human; etc.

In comparison of \'APOBEC3\' gene that immunity to virus infection, It is known that over 10 genes Induce inflammation to infection are disabled state differently other mammals.
>> In the comparison of \'APOBEC3\' gene that is immune to virus infection, it is known that over 10 genes Induce inflammation to infection are in a disabled state differently in other mammals.

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