The secret of birth
학생이 쓴 원문
As you know, I'm keen on lots of dramas.
There have been many dramas which got involved in mistakes of the birth especially in Korea.
Even the era is various from the historical era to the modern.
In reality, some adults tell a kid a lie only for fun that they took him under the bridge when he was a little baby.
You know that the pronunciation of "the legs" and the one of "the bridge" are the same in Korean.
As he gets older, he realizes how to be born and what they meant.
I also heard that when I was a little girl.
I doubted my birth like those dramas and I might be a girl of the rich.
But the lie turned out sooner because I have looked like my father too much.
So some relatives who I don't know well recognized easily that whose daughter I am :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You should be a writer because you have great topics.
And I like how you elaborate them.
You entertain me so much. Haha!
-Tiny^0^
As you know, I'm keen on lots of dramas.
>>correctThere have been many dramas which got involved in mistakes of the birth especially in Korea.
>> There have been many dramas which are about unwanted pregnancy especially in Korea.
Even the era is various from the historical era to the modern.
>> Even if the era varies from the historical one to the modern one.
In reality, some adults tell a kid a lie only for fun that they took him under the bridge when he was a little baby.
>>correctYou know that the pronunciation of "the legs" and the one of "the bridge" are the same in Korean.
>> Just for you to know the pronunciation of "the legs" and "the bridge" are the same in Korean.
As he gets older, he realizes how to be born and what they meant.
>>correctI also heard that when I was a little girl.
>>correctI doubted my birth like those dramas and I might be a girl of the rich.
>>correctBut the lie turned out sooner because I have looked like my father too much.
>>correct haha!So some relatives who I don't know well recognized easily that whose daughter I am :)
>> So some relatives who I don't know will recognized easily whose daughter I am. :)
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