The site which I visit frequently.

I am going to tell you one of sites which I visit. The name of it is Diesel mania. Diesel is a famous italian jean brand which is popular among fashion people. As you can tell from the name, it is the fashion site. I can see someone's fashion or opinion on fashion item in that site. Since I can get a lot of information , I like visiting that site. But sometimes I hate that site because the managers of it acts as if they were cops. When I critisize someone's fashion or make a joke on someone, They would force me to leave that site. Once I kicked out of that site, I cound't join that site again. That's why I joined that site using my sister's ID I want them not to overreact to criticism.

Hi [이름]! I tried to look at that site that you mentioned but I couldn't find it. Anyway, as for your article, we don't know if some people may get hurt by our comments. Try to be subtle in your next comments in that site. Here are your corrections- Teacher JM   I am going to tell you one of sites which I visit. >>>I am going to tell you one of the sites which I visit. The name of it is Diesel mania. >>>CorrectDiesel is a famous italian jean brand which is popular among fashion people. >>>Better>>> It's name is Diesel Mania.As you can tell from the name, it is the fashion site. >>>Diesel is a famous italian brand of jeans which is popular among fashionable peopleI can see someone's fashion or opinion on fashion item in that site. >>>Correct Since I can get a lot of information , I like visiting that site. >>>CorrectBut sometimes I hate that site because the managers of it acts as if they were cops. >>>But I sometimes hate that site because the site managers act as if they were cops.When I critisize someone's fashion or make a joke on someone, >>>When I criticized someone's fashion or made a joke on someone,They would force me to leave that site. >>>they would force me to leave that site.Once I kicked out of that site, I cound't join that site again. >>>I was kicked out of that site and I cound't join that site again.That's why I joined that site using my sister's ID >>>CorrectI want them not to overreact to criticism. >>>I don't want them to overreact to criticism.