The situation when I go to a buffet
학생이 쓴 원문
My friends and I love going to buffet, because we can eat many kinds of food.
So we eat out on a buffet once or twice a month.
We deliver our dishes on the go, because we always think that we have to make our money\'s worth by taking specialty in this buffet!
강사 첨삭
You have shared another smart strategy, [이름]! I think you are an expert when it comes to eating at buffets. ^^
-Khai
My friends and I love going to buffet, because we can eat many kinds of food.
>> My friends and I love going to the buffet because we can eat many kinds of food.
So we eat out on a buffet once or twice a month.
So we eat out on a buffet once or twice a month.
>> CORRECT
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>> Because of this, we go to a buffet once or twice a month.
We deliver our dishes on the go, because we always think that we have to make our money\'s worth by taking specialty in this buffet!>> We always want to try the specialty dishes on the buffet. We think that with this strategy, we are getting our money’s worth.
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