The situations what makes me angry.

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In these days, I have been angry much more than before.

>> I feel angrier than usual these days.

It is because my plan and my real life were not.

>> This is because my plans and my reality don\'t match.

I usually thought that I couldn\'t realize what I had promised my self.

>> I think that I can\'t realize my dream.

For example, Waking up earlier, working out every day and so on.

>> Some examples are waking up early, working out every day and so on.
 In fact, I don\'t know this way that getting anger to myself is really good things for me.

>> In fact, I don\'t know if getting angry with myself is a good thing.

Before I think that it makes me more deligent and makes me mature.

>> Before, I thought that anger made me more diligent and mature.

But now, it also is one of the reasons making me unhappy.

>> But now, it is also one of the reasons that makes me unhappy.
 I don\'t know how can I control this emotion.

>>  I don\'t know how I can control this emotion.