The slender body.
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think the fashion and advertising industries are responsible for keeping women skinny. Because there are only very skinny people in the fashion and advertising industries. People long for and dream of that skinny body as beautiful. Women risk themselves to be skinny.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Yes, I think the fashion and advertising industries are responsible for keeping women skinny.
>>> CORRECT!
Because there are only very skinny people in the fashion and advertising industries.
>>> CORRECT!
People long for and dream of that skinny body as beautiful.
>>> CORRECT!
Women risk themselves to be skinny.
>>> CORRECT!
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