The solution of keeping my life balance

2021-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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When I have too much work that even I can\'t take a break enough, I start to relax myself at the night. I usually watch a movie whose mood is calm or some fun youtube videos, so I can enjoy my own time.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

We do the same thing! It\'s always great to give more time for yourself. It\'s called self-love. Keep it up! :)

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When I have too much work that even I can\'t take a break enough, I start to relax myself at the night.

>> When I have too much work that even I can\'t take a break , I relax myself at night.

I usually watch a movie whose mood is calm or some fun youtube videos, so I can enjoy my own time.

>> I usually watch movies that calm me down or funny videos on YouTube so I can enjoy my time.

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