The solve of getting water :)
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The world’s population is increasing rapidly. Getting clean water for everyone might become difficult in the future. Think of three ways we can avoid this problem.
Answering the question, first, We should find another planet to live a mankind. I mean a planet existed a water. This solution is very reasonable. Because the mankind is developing expacially about science.
Another way is, I think, creating a water in some way. It doesn't mean a circulation of water. I mean it has to be made something new material.
Any way...today's topic is very serious and difficult...ㅠ0ㅠ
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing your ideas.
They are very good ideas.
Like you have said, because of Science there are a lot of developments.
So in the future, your ideas could be possible.
Anyway, see you on Monday!
~T. Jessie~
The world’s population is increasing rapidly. Getting clean water for everyone might become difficult in the future. Think of three ways we can avoid this problem.Answering the question, first, We should find another planet to live a mankind.
>> To answer the question, first, we should find another planet where mankind can live.
I mean a planet existed a water.
>> I mean a planet which has water.
This solution is very reasonable.
>> Correct!
Because the mankind is developing expacially about science.
>> Because mankind is developing a lot because of Science.Another way is, I think, creating a water in some way.
>> Another way is, I think, creating water in some ways.
It doesn\'t mean a circulation of water.
>> It doesn\'t mean the circulation of water.
I mean it has to be made something new material. >> I mean it has to be made from a new material.
Any way...today\'s topic is very serious and difficult...ㅠ0ㅠ
>> Anyway, today\'s topic is very serious and difficult...ㅠ0ㅠ
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